Meeting on the Dunes

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Meeting on the Dunes

March 22, 2003, 9:59 pm

Here's an odd one - what on earth was I getting at when I wrote this??I brought my book one day to show the sky,My lying book, among the wrinkled dunes;I lifted it above my shoulders high,Bright-eyed...

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March 23, 2003, 1:20 am

imagination on steroids.strongly cohesive andoddly evocative.good work.Benpensez+pensi+denkenSie+pense+piense

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Re: Meeting on the Dunes

March 23, 2003, 9:57 am

I liked this, denial-understanding-regret, a fine poem. Thanks for sharing it...jinx

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Re: Meeting on the Dunes

March 23, 2003, 11:41 am

Thank you Ben, and jinx, for reassuring me about this!Davie

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Re: Meeting on the Dunes

March 23, 2003, 1:14 pm

I liked this very much - thought provoking and could be read as an analogy for different things. Well written too! "Idiot, n. A member of a large and powerful tribe whose influence in human affairs...

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Re: Meeting on the Dunes

March 23, 2003, 11:35 pm

Thank you very much, Valoe for these thoughts. I've sat on this one for ages, because the picture was so clear, but the meaning so obscure.Davie

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